The Brief: Re-write a welcome email for an established LinkedIn creators newsletter.
The original email was an automated newsletter platform template. My goal was to create a warmer and more human first impression, introduce the creator and a bit of their story, and clarify what the subscribers can expect from emails, AND also point them towards their other content channels (creating a content loop).
I looked at sentence length and flow, personality, how they introduce ideas, how they speak to their readers, and repeated themes and phrases.
I structured the email around a simple progession:
Who are you? → What is this? → What will I get? → Where can I go next?
Instead of beggining with a general subscription confirmation, the rewrite starts with the person behind the newsletter. The final section gives multiple ways the subscriber can engage and see the creator's other content.
From Automated → Personal
Turned a generic subscription confirmation into a warm welcome.
From "here's what you subscribed to" → "here's what you get from staying"
Made the newsletter's value and content clearer
From one email → an entry point
Added clear paths to explore more of the creator's existing content